SCRIPT TO SCREEN - PITCH FOR 'SOFT' SHORT FILM




Today we watched the short film by Simon Ellis called 'Soft' we was asked to do a pitch for the film so here is my pitch …

PITCH FOR 'SOFT' :  A son depends on his dad to take action on his bullies, when his dad can't fight back his son takes action in a brutal way.



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  1. SimonWelsfordSeptember 21, 2018 at 4:02 AM

    Your soft pitch is pretty good, but it does reveal the main story twist idea - i.e. that its the son. It can work better to keep key story elements back in a pitch. Well done though.

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