SCRIPT TO SCREEN- PLOT CHANGES TO MY IDEA 'Y4'

PLOT CHANGES 




This was my plot for the ending.

• Josh is thirsty and asked Annie if she would like a drink, she asks for a glass of water.
• Josh comes back with the glass of water, the nurse is in the room.
• Annie explains she is just tied but they can continue the game tomorrow at the same time.

Next Day

• Josh arrive to the dayroom at 1:50, he looks down at his phone and turns it off.
• The game of scrabble is still on the table with the same set up.
• The clock ticks by 2'oclock , 3'oclok , 4'oclock. 
• The nurse opens the door, its time for Josh to go, he asks about Annie.
• The nurse shakes her head, Josh says he will be out in a minute.
• Josh goes and looks back at the scrabble board it reads 'Goodbye' with the scrabble letters.
• Josh leaves his phone on the table and walks towards the door with one final look before he leaves.

I decided to change it due to some factors that I have learned whilst watching short films and for the research I have about hospital day rooms, plus using one location without having an additional one will be easier for me to work with, I now have structured it this way.

• Josh is thirsty so he gets up to go to the water dispenser in the same room
• The nurse knocks on the door and enters to change the dead flowers
• Annie is making a word on the scrabble board and has a funny turn
• The nurse takes Annie out the room, Annie explains she will be back later to carry on the game and not to touch the scrabble board.
• The time is ticking away, Josh is reading magazines, the clock is seen passing time.
• The Nurse knocks on the door for Josh to go.
• Josh asks where Annie is, the Nurse Shakes her head
• Josh looks down at the scrabble board, the last word that Annie wrote on the board was "Goodbye"
• Josh gets up and puts his rucksack on, he puts his phone on the table.
• As josh is about to leave he see's Annie has dropped 4 pictures.
• Josh picks them up, looks at them and smiles before he exits 
• The end credits will be of the 4 pictures of Annie and her Granddaughter with 'Goodbye Annie' on the last one.